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andreaxx

想请各位学霸们帮我修改一下这两个句子， 拜托了
1. I also interviewed two people, both of them said they would go to visit Shanghai one day, because the want to learn more about the culture in Shanghai.

2,I went to Shanghai in June of 2018. This trip is gave me a opportunity to know more about this city.
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Christineuic

1. I interviewed  other two  candidates also .Both of them would like to visit Shanghai one day, since they want to learn more about the culture of Shanghai.

2. I went to Shanghai in June of 2018. This trip gave me an opportunity to  know more about the city.