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123_啦啦啦_123 · 发表于 2014-4-15 10:23:21

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今年大一不是特别好的大学 business基础课
作业我自己做完了找tutor改过了但是觉得tutor不靠谱

因为找tutor改过了拿B应该是可以的所以从B+开始给钱 B或B以下没钱哦 B+ 5刀，A- 13刀， A 20刀， A+ 30刀（改完先给3刀B以下还钱

老师Grade出来了给剩下的钱大概他要批1-2周）就改20句语法问题这个价格应该可以了吧价格不合适告诉我

这是要求 Most of these 20 sentences (or almost sentences, as the case may be) would benefitfrom revision. It may be that some arerun-on sentences, and some may be only fragments. Some could lack parallel structure, some maynot demonstrate proper agreement, some might be better as two sentences, somemay be too wordy or pretentious, and some could have spelling or typographicalerrors. Please help! That is, in the space provided, rewrite the sentences in the manner you think is required.

[WARNING: Two of the sentences are just fine. They do not need your help at all.]

这是第一句原文The benefits of networking, earning andutilizing a degree are well worth the costs in order to have a better chance ofsuccess.

改完以后的（不是标准答案）The benefits of networking, earning and utilizing a degree are well worth the costs. Those benefits allow people to have a better chance of success.

这是tutor都无从下手的 Quality of college graduates is hard tomeasure, and some think that with rising prices comes depleting value from teachers and the whole process.

可以改的加微信746935949 必须在美国东部时间四月17号一点前给我